Friday, February 27, 2015

Dr.Lissade:Industrial Food Chain Reflection

I think the risks do outweigh the benefits of the Industrial Food Chain because one many of the risks is effecting our lives (humans) & the living things on farms. The benefits is probably only benefiting farmers and their plants. The text states" But in a CAFO they are forced to eat corn - at consider- able cost to their health, to the health of the land..." This shows that one of the risks is effecting the cows and kinda the humans because we eat the cow meat too. Also it states " This is a giant public health problem, costing the health care system.." 
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  1. UnknownFebruary 27, 2015 at 5:49 AM

    Good evidence, next steps add more evidence and final explanation and show benefits. 👏

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  2. UnknownFebruary 27, 2015 at 5:56 AM

    You should show the benefits and explain the evidence

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  3. UnknownFebruary 27, 2015 at 5:57 AM

    Your whole idea of trying to outweigh risk with benefits,but I would of pefered if you didn't start the the post with "I think" it's persuasive your claim is suppose to be strong and also your evidence wasn't so strong and you fight really bring any risk to the table

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